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Merry Christmas, everyone! Have a happy holidays to you all!

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Story by Guts and Leonard Kirke
Scripted and Illustrated by Piti Yindee
Writing and Proofreading by Leonard Kirke

- Piti Yindee



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Seems like you've been trying a new style with the art on this one. The paper texture seems to be missing, but it's not much of an issue. For the colors, they look brighter than your previous comics. The art style seems to look simpler, but it's no problem, as it actually looks better.

For the writing, there's not much of a problem. Dialogue's all good. Foxxo's 'tsundere' moment is one of the cutest thing in this comic, only being topped by many pf Puipui's moments. What caught me by surprise (and the impact still remains) is with Chuck having a boyfriend. You're certainly trying new things with the story, and they're going for the better :)

To end ,this is one of the best you've made this year. Not to say that the others aren't good. They are, but this one really stands out. Looking forward to more of Wuffle next year.
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MetalExveemon Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014
You wanna know something I realized? They're eating roast duck, and your icon is a duck version of yourself (presumably, anyway, I don't know that for certain). ;) :XD:
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PitiYindee Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
W-Wellll, there many ways to make a cameo in the comic, right? >.>
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MetalExveemon Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014
Oh gosh... so you cameoed as your characters' dinner? Dude, you've got stuff. I can't possibly think of any other person who would do that. :XD:
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Erikku-Kun Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist

Heheh this was so cute ^^

Fantastic work

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chirenbo Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That grumpy gene's surely from his dad LOL
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DomDozz Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
Pretty cool! Using Flash to upload the comic XD even though it takes long to load, it's worth the wait! ;)
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PitiYindee Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And a lot easier to read too ^3^
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DomDozz Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Heheheh, indeed! :D
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Tylerthefox Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AWWW that was the best christmas ever i wish i could of been there even foxxo was being nice haha i bet he was visted by three ghosts before he got there HAHAHA! the cute little guy oh well i guess it all worked out at the end
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PitiYindee Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol Foxxo as a Scrooge? Hmmmm >8 ) 
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